ThePegster's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Caramel Dance ~ Jaz style]

Amazing

This is the best flash I have ever seen.

[Shattered Heaven Act 2.1]

Choppy.

Now, this is an amazing video with good animations and great voice acting, but I feel you need more of a story, and even though I know you said you had a high frame rate, it still seemed kind of choppy. If you need help with the story, PM me, I am a great writer.

AdamTilford responds:

I'm fine, the story is fine. You can't judge a story by one part of an episode. Considering that I'm a writer and have written 4 books, the first one in the process of publishing. This is also one part of 3 parts for the second episode.......so yeah, you can't judge a story from a single segment.

I appreciate the offer, but again you can't judge a story that focuses on development by one section. It's like reading a chapter in a novel without reading to see how everything is developed and then say that the novel doesn't have a good story.

[Primal War 18]

Game?

Great movie, I'm probably not the first to say it, but this just begs for a game.

[PSA: Dont eat souvlakis.]

Clock crew stop.

Alright, the clock crew really has to stop spamming the portal, it's just getting old.

[sayhi.swf]

Troller

I don't care what your crew does, just stop spamming the portal.

[Serious Help Episode 2-2]

Dizzy

The video was funny, it was good too. But, my only problem with the video would be the camera angles, it was kind of dizzying, and I couldn't tell what's going on.

joshuablake responds:

This one goes by pretty fast, I guess I was experimenting with the use of the angles, seeing as I had never focused on them before I'd say I could do better now.

[The Jake and Josh Show EP]

Not Flash >=(

This isn't flash, next time make it in flash.

[Run Blue Buddy PSDay08]

Faux loop spam

Most people will believe this is a loop spam, because of the intro.
Y'might wanna shorten the intro so people don't blam.

FlashManJR14 responds:

yea i see what you mean

[{PS} Dance]

Weird.

I found it oddly entertaining, yet it lacks some things.
Add different dance moves to loop.
Add more characters.

["A Slice of the Action"]

Great

Amazing quality animation, hilarious ending, I'm still lolling! FAVS!