Choppy.
Now, this is an amazing video with good animations and great voice acting, but I feel you need more of a story, and even though I know you said you had a high frame rate, it still seemed kind of choppy. If you need help with the story, PM me, I am a great writer.
I'm fine, the story is fine. You can't judge a story by one part of an episode. Considering that I'm a writer and have written 4 books, the first one in the process of publishing. This is also one part of 3 parts for the second episode.......so yeah, you can't judge a story from a single segment.
I appreciate the offer, but again you can't judge a story that focuses on development by one section. It's like reading a chapter in a novel without reading to see how everything is developed and then say that the novel doesn't have a good story.
Game?
Great movie, I'm probably not the first to say it, but this just begs for a game.
Clock crew stop.
Alright, the clock crew really has to stop spamming the portal, it's just getting old.
Dizzy
The video was funny, it was good too. But, my only problem with the video would be the camera angles, it was kind of dizzying, and I couldn't tell what's going on.
This one goes by pretty fast, I guess I was experimenting with the use of the angles, seeing as I had never focused on them before I'd say I could do better now.
Not Flash >=(
This isn't flash, next time make it in flash.
Faux loop spam
Most people will believe this is a loop spam, because of the intro.
Y'might wanna shorten the intro so people don't blam.
yea i see what you mean
Weird.
I found it oddly entertaining, yet it lacks some things.
Add different dance moves to loop.
Add more characters.
Great
Amazing quality animation, hilarious ending, I'm still lolling! FAVS!
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